My written homework for this week is

Talk about a good experience you had recently

I have worked as a software engineer now at Amazon for more than 9 years. During that entire time I only wrote software related to the work I was doing. A constant worry I had though was whether or not I could write software outside of Amazon. Amazon has lots of tools and services to make building software inside the company easy. I was always unsure how I would do if I had to figure out and do things on my own.

Recently a friend asked me to help her build her website. This was a great opportunity for me to write some software without any help from Amazon. I agreed and got to work.

It was very weird at first since building software inside Amazon meant you had to use very specific kinds of tools and couldn't go too crazy. For this project I had a lot more freedom to use modern tools and languages which was fun.

I am still in the middle of this project but I feel a lot more confident in my abilities as a software engineer.


Corrected by Kana

ใ“ใฎ๏ผ™ๅนดใ‹ใ‚“ใ€็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ข ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใ‚ขใ€€ใจใ—ใฆใ€€ใฏใŸใ‚‰ใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใฏใ€€ใ‹ใ‚“ใŸใ‚“ใ€€ใซใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใŒใ€€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€‚

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใ„ใŒใ„ใ€€ใฎใ€€ใ‹ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ€€ใซใ€€ใฏใ„ใŸใ‚‰ใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‹๏ผŸใ—ใ‚“ใฑใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚

็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ไธ€ไบบใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ไฝœใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ‹ใ€€ใ„ใคใ‚‚ใ€€ใตใ‚ใ‚“ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ•ใ„ใใ‚“ใ€€ใจใ‚‚ใ ใกใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ€Œใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ€€ใฅใใ‚Šใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใ‚Œใพใ™ใ‹ใ€ใ€€ใจใ€€่žใ„ใฆใใŸใ€€

ใ“ใ‚Œใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใฎใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใ‚ใชใ„ใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚‹ใ€€ใ„ใ„ใ€€ใใ‹ใ„ใ ใ€€ใจใ€€ๆ€ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใฆใคใ ใ†ใ€€ใ“ใจใ€€ใซใ€€ใใ‚ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใฏใ€€ใฟใ‚“ใชใ€€ๅŒใ˜ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใฃใฆใ€€ใ„ใ‚‹ใ€€ใฎใงใ€ใ€€ใ•ใ„ใ—ใ‚“ใ€€ใฎใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใฎใ€€ใคใ‹ใ„ใ‹ใŸใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‹ใ‚‰ใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ€€ใฎใงใ€€ใ•ใ„ใ—ใ‚‡ใ€€ใฏใ€€ใŸใ„ใธใ‚“ใ€€ใงใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ“ใฎใ€€ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใงใ€€็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ˜ใถใ‚“ใ€€ใฎใ€€ๅฅฝใใชใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใงใ€€ๅฅฝใใชใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ€€ใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใ€€ใฎใงใ€€ใŸใฎใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใฏใ€€ใพใ ใ€€ใŠใ‚ใฃใฆใชใ„ใ€€ใ‘ใฉใ€€ใ˜ใถใ‚“ ใฎใ€€ใ‚นใ‚ญใƒซใ€€ใฎใ€€ใ˜ใ—ใ‚“ใ€€ใŒใ€€ใคใ„ใŸใ€‚


Corrected by my Teacher

ใ“ใฎ๏ผ™ๅนดใ‹ใ‚“ใ€€็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ข ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใ‚ขใ€€ใจใ—ใฆใ€€ใฏใŸใ‚‰ใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

ไปŠใพใงใ€€ใœใ‚“ใถใ€€ใฎใ€€ใคใใฃใŸใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใฎใ€€ใŸใ‚ใ€€ใซใ€€ใ ใ‘ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใšใฃใจใ€€ใชใ‚„ใฟใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚ใ‚‚ใ—ใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใŒใ€€ใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚‰ใ€€ในใคใ€€ใฎใ€€ใ‹ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚‰ใ‚Œใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใซใ€€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใฎใ€€ใคใใ‚Šใ‹ใŸใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‹ใ‚“ใŸใ‚“ใ€€ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ„ใคใ‚‚ใ€€ใตใ‚ใ‚“ใงใ™ใ€‚็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ไธ€ไบบใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ไฝœใ‚‰ใ‚Œใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ

ใ•ใ„ใใ‚“ใ€€ใจใ‚‚ใ ใกใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ€Œใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใ‚Œใพใ™ใ‹ใ€ใ€€ใจใ€€ใใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

็งใฏใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใฎใ€€ใฆใคใ ใ„ใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใ‚ใชใ„ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€€ใ“ใ‚Œใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ„ใ„ใ€€ใใ‹ใ„ใ€€ใ ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ•ใ‚“ใ›ใ„ใ—ใฆใ€€ใฏใ˜ใ‚ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใฟใ‚“ใชใ€€ใฏใ€€ๅŒใ˜ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใฃใฆใ„ใ‚‹ใ—ใ€ใ€€ใ„ใกใฐใ‚“ใ€€ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใ€€ใ‚‚ใฎใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ไฝฟใˆใชใ„ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€€ใ•ใ„ใ—ใ‚‡ใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ™ใ”ใใ€€ใธใ‚“ใ€€ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ“ใฎใ€€ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใงใ€€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ€€ใ˜ใ‚†ใ†ใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใฉใ‚“ใชใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใฃใฆใ‚‚ใ„ใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใฏใ€€ใพใ ใ€€ใŠใ‚ใฃใฆใชใ„ใ€€ใ‘ใฉใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใ‚ข ใฎใ€€ใ˜ใ—ใ‚“ใ€€ใŒใ€€ใตใˆใพใ—ใŸ


My original attempt

ใ“ใฎ๏ผ™ๅนดใ‹ใ‚“ใ€€ใซใ€€็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ข ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใƒคใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใฏใŸใ‚‰ใ„ใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

ใใฎใ€€ๆ™‚ใ€€ใœใ‚“ใถใ€€ใฎใ€€ใคใใฃใŸใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใฎใ€€ใŸใ‚ใ€€ใซใ€€ใ ใ‘ใ€‚

ใšใฃใจใ€€ใชใ‚„ใฟใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใ€€ใ‚‚ใ—ใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใŒใ€€ใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‚‰ใ€€ในใคใ€€ใฎใ€€ใ‹ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใใ‚‰ใ‚Œใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใซใ€€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€€ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใคใใ‚Šใ‹ใŸใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‹ใ‚“ใŸใ‚“ใ€€ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ„ใคใ‚‚ใ€€ใตใ‚ใ‚“ใ ใ€‚็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ไธ€ไบบใงใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ไฝœใ‚Œใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ

ใ•ใ„ใใ‚“ใ€€ใจใ‚‚ใ ใกใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ€Œใ‚ฆใ‚งใƒ–ใ‚ตใ‚คใƒˆใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใ‚Œใพใ™ใ‹ใ€ใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใใ„ใŸใ€‚

ใ“ใ‚Œใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ„ใ„ใ€€ใใ‹ใ„ใ€‚็งใฏใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใฎใ€€ใฆใคใ ใ†ใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใ‚ใชใ„ใ€‚

็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ใฉใ†ใ„ใ—ใฆใ€€ใฏใ˜ใพใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ‚ขใƒžใ‚พใƒณใ€€ใงใ€€ใฟใ‚“ใชใ€€ใฏใ€€ๅŒใ˜ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใจใ€€ใ‚ตใƒผใƒ“ใ‚นใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใฃใŸใ—ใ€ใ€€ใ„ใกใฐใ‚“ใ€€ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ใ€€ใ‚‚ใฎใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ไฝฟใˆใชใ„ใ€€ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€€ใ•ใ„ใ—ใ‚‡ใ€€ใฏใ€€ใ™ใ”ใใ€€ใธใ‚“ใ€€ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใ“ใฎใ€€ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใงใ€€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใ€€ใ˜ใ‚†ใ†ใ€€ใŒใ€€ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚็งใ€€ใฏใ€€ไฝ•ใงใ‚‚ใ€€ใƒ„ใƒผใƒซใ€€ใ‚’ใ€€ใคใ‹ใฃใฆใ‚‚ใ„ใ„ใงใ™ใ€‚

ใƒ—ใƒญใ‚ธใ‚งใ‚ฏใƒˆใ€€ใฏใ€€ใพใ ใ€€ใŠใ‚ใฃใฆใชใ„ใ€€ใ‘ใฉใ€€ใ‚ฝใƒ•ใƒˆใ‚ฆใ‚งใ‚ขใ€€ใ‚จใƒณใ‚ธใƒ‹ใƒค ใฎใ€€ใ˜ใ—ใ‚“ใ€€ใŒใ€€ใตใˆใŸใ€‚