My written homework for this week is
Talk about a good experience you had recently
I have worked as a software engineer now at Amazon for more than 9 years. During that entire time I only wrote software related to the work I was doing. A constant worry I had though was whether or not I could write software outside of Amazon. Amazon has lots of tools and services to make building software inside the company easy. I was always unsure how I would do if I had to figure out and do things on my own.
Recently a friend asked me to help her build her website. This was a great opportunity for me to write some software without any help from Amazon. I agreed and got to work.
It was very weird at first since building software inside Amazon meant you had to use very specific kinds of tools and couldn't go too crazy. For this project I had a lot more freedom to use modern tools and languages which was fun.
I am still in the middle of this project but I feel a lot more confident in my abilities as a software engineer.
Corrected by Kana
ใใฎ๏ผๅนดใใใ็งใ ใฏใใขใใพใณใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใข ใจใณใธใใขใใจใใฆใใฏใใใใฆใใพใใ
ใขใใพใณใใงใฏใใใใใใใซใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใใคใใใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใใใใใใใใใใ
ใขใใพใณใใใใใใฎใใใใใใใซใใฏใใใใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใใคใใใใ๏ผใใใฑใใงใใ
็งใใฏใไธไบบใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใไฝใใใใใใคใใใตใใใงใใ
ใใใใใใจใใ ใกใใใใใฆใงใใตใคใใใฅใใใใใใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใใพใใใใใจใ่ใใฆใใใ
ใใใใฏใใขใใพใณใใฎใใใผใซใใใใคใใใชใใใงใใฆใงใใตใคใใใใใคใใใใใใใใใใ ใใจใๆใใพใใใ
็งใใฏใใฆใคใ ใใใใจใใซใใใใพใใใ
ใขใใพใณใใงใฏใใฟใใชใๅใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใคใใฃใฆใใใใใฎใงใใใใใใใใฎใใใผใซใใฎใใคใใใใใใใใใใใชใใฃใใใฎใงใใใใใใใฏใใใใธใใใงใใใ
ใใฎใใใญใธใงใฏใใใงใ็งใใฏใใใถใใใฎใๅฅฝใใชใใใผใซใใงใๅฅฝใใชใใใซใใฆใงใใตใคใใใใใคใใใใใฎใงใใใฎใใใงใใ
ใใญใธใงใฏใใใฏใใพใ ใใใใฃใฆใชใใใใฉใใใถใ ใฎใในใญใซใใฎใใใใใใใใคใใใ
Corrected by my Teacher
ใใฎ๏ผๅนดใใใ็งใใฏใใขใใพใณใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใข ใจใณใธใใขใใจใใฆใใฏใใใใฆใใพใใ
ไปใพใงใใใใถใใฎใใคใใฃใใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใฏใใขใใพใณใใฎใใใใใซใใ ใใงใใ
ใใฃใจใใชใใฟใใใใใใพใใใใใใขใใพใณใใใใชใใฃใใใในใคใใฎใใใใใใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใใคใใใใใพใใ๏ผ
ใขใใพใณใใซใใใใใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใใใใใใใใขใใพใณใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใฎใใคใใใใใใใใใใใใใงใใ
ใใคใใใตใใใงใใ็งใใฏใไธไบบใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใไฝใใใพใใ๏ผ
ใใใใใใจใใ ใกใใฏใใใฆใงใใตใคใใใใใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใใพใใใใใจใใใใพใใใ
็งใฏใขใใพใณใใฎใใฆใคใ ใใใใใคใใใชใใใใใใใใใฏใใใใใใใใใ ใจๆใใพใใใ
็งใใฏใใใใใใใฆใใฏใใใพใใใ
ใขใใพใณใใงใใฟใใชใใฏใๅใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใคใใฃใฆใใใใใใใกใฐใใใใใใใใใใฎใใใไฝฟใใชใใใใใใใใใใใฏใใใใใใธใใใงใใ
ใใฎใใใญใธใงใฏใใใงใใใใใใใใใใใใใใใพใใ็งใใฏใใฉใใชใใใผใซใใใใคใใฃใฆใใใใงใใ
ใใญใธใงใฏใใใฏใใพใ ใใใใฃใฆใชใใใใฉใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใจใณใธใใข ใฎใใใใใใใใตใใพใใ
My original attempt
ใใฎ๏ผๅนดใใใใซใ็งใใฏใใขใใพใณใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใข ใจใณใธใใคใใใใฏใใใใฆใใพใใ
ใใฎใๆใใใใถใใฎใใคใใฃใใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใฏใใขใใพใณใใฎใใใใใซใใ ใใ
ใใฃใจใใชใใฟใใใใใใใใใใใใใใขใใพใณใใใใชใใฃใใใในใคใใฎใใใใใใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใใคใใใใใพใใ๏ผ
ใขใใพใณใใซใใใใใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใใใใใใใขใใพใณใใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใคใใใใใใใใใใใใใงใใ
ใใคใใใตใใใ ใ็งใใฏใไธไบบใงใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใใไฝใใใพใใ๏ผ
ใใใใใใจใใ ใกใใฏใใใฆใงใใตใคใใใใใฆใคใ ใฃใฆใใใพใใใใใใใใใใ
ใใใใฏใใใใใใใใ็งใฏใขใใพใณใใฎใใฆใคใ ใใใใใคใใใชใใ
็งใใฏใใฉใใใใฆใใฏใใพใใพใใใ
ใขใใพใณใใงใใฟใใชใใฏใๅใใใใผใซใใจใใตใผใในใใใใคใใฃใใใใใใกใฐใใใใใใใใใใฎใใใไฝฟใใชใใใใใใใใใใใฏใใใใใใธใใใงใใ
ใใฎใใใญใธใงใฏใใใงใใใใใใใใใใใใใใใพใใ็งใใฏใไฝใงใใใใผใซใใใใคใใฃใฆใใใใงใใ
ใใญใธใงใฏใใใฏใใพใ ใใใใฃใฆใชใใใใฉใใฝใใใฆใงใขใใจใณใธใใค ใฎใใใใใใใใตใใใ